English - Priory

 This week the children have been learning how to edit their narrative story. They have looked for spelling mistakes, lack of punctuation as well as handwriting. For some, their target is to ensure they use better adjectives and adverbs to give their writing description and imagery. 

From their writing task, the focus has been on learning how to use adjectives, adverbs and expanded noun phrases to good effect. This means the reader can picture exactly what the character looks like, the setting and what is taking place. They have used various text drivers, pictures to help them understand how this works and practice this. 

Some amazing work Year 5.